Who am I?

After the individual interaction and introspection over my draft 2, I have made changes as recommended by teacher. Though the discussion turned out to be an emotional scene for me, it did teach me a lot. It was really more like a personal counselling rather than making a draft 2 and I found many flaws in my thinking. I am really grateful to have a teacher like you in my life.
Here’s the Final Draft 3.
