I couldn’t attend this class but I recieved my first draft after being read by ma’am.
âShe suggested me not to do corrections according to my peer review.
â She mentioned that doing so will take away the joy of reading.
âShe also told me to navigate better through words by using some geographical locations.
I have considered these tips and incorporated these changes in my writing. I have tried to make my city seem simpler yet complicated through words. One needs full amount of concentration while reading my storyline to understand and navigate through it with ease.
Glorious messđ 